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 Just One Night Open in new Window. [XGC]
A fantasy come true.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: XGC | (4.0)
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Review of Just One Night

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short descriptive story about a couple who are setting up a planned threesome and are concerned that it does not negatively affect their own relationship. Mitch does his best to convince Beth that this encounter with Tiffany is just sexual because he likes to have sex with a different woman from time to time.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Beth is unsure about this threesome. It seems that she has no problem with having sex with Tiff but her concern is just that Mitch wants Tiff more that her. This is not an unusual feeling when the man is setting up the threesome. Beth after being reassured takes control and has Mitch only enter the activities after Beth and Tiff have progressed the erotic stimulation to a good start. Mitch enter the three and Beth in particular.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A well balanced story. I enjoyed it.

dblameck

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