I am reviewing for Game of Thrones on WDC. My goal is to help with this review not hurt or hinder.

This is a good poem. the rhyme fits throughout. There are minor things I would like to recommend. You don't have to make these changes if you don't want to.

Add a space after the title.

Take out apostrophe in dairyman's. it is a possession so there is no apostrophe. Either that or space out dairy mans son. I know it can get a little confusing in the writing and reading. To me reading "dairyman's" is like reading dairyman is, with son coming after that it does not read right.

Stanza 4 line 2 take out 'then'

Stanza 5 line 2 take 'for' and end the stanza with a period.

Stanza 7 line 2 take out 'and' add 'with' instead. change 'and hid' to 'hiding'

Your word choice was good it showed what was going on and the emotions of the female character. The reader is to assume that her father knows she likes the dairy mans son and that's not good because the father wants the daughter to marry someone he wants her to marry. Makes sense in context.
This is a good piece. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.