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 The Photo's Open in new Window. [XGC]
What you expect to see behind the lens isn't always what you see.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: XGC | (4.0)
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Review of The Photos

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short erotic tale of a photographer who comes across two woman at the lake on a Saturday. The woman, one who is blonde while the other is a brunette, are nude and obvious engaged ir romantic erotic activity. The blonde seems to more the aggressor and active person in the situation.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The woman carry this fun and love to conclusion. The photographer gets himself off by hand. The cameraman realizes that he can keep these picture he has take without their permission. They get dressed and are leaving and he offers them the disc with the pictures. They tell him they know he was taking the pictures and they make a deal to share the proceeds from the pictures.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good story. Keep up the good work.

dblameck

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