\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4247125
Review #4247125
Viewing a review of: {citem:}
Review of  Open in new Window.
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  Open in new Window.
Rated: | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)

A review for the House of Greyjoy


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


Review of Desdemona

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is a very good story. It starts with a man depressed eating a tv dinner that does not sound very appetizing to me. It was not like the meals that Sarah made. He decides he needs to some naked female flesh so heads to the gentleman's club.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

In the club he meets Desdemona who is not top line dancer but does a very good job for this particular client. She then convinces him to have a table dance. at the end of the table dance she asks if he will drive her home at the end of the night. He agrees. On the way home she gets amorous and she uses lotion to start to massage his organ and the story ends as she moves to giving him head.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A good story and I enjoyed it.

dblameck

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 08/01/2016 @ 7:16am EDT
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4247125