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 Don't Try that Again  [18+]
Musings on the night I met my wife
by percy goodfellow
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Review of Don't Try that Again

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Sometimes all we have left,are,the memories. This story spends moments of a man retelling what happened on the night he met his wife. Meeting at an American Legion Hall they spend time at a campfire where he teaches her to french kiss and is stopped by her when he tries to reach second base.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The memories of Linda and the time they spent together. There were so many things that he remembers and enjoys the times that they had together. when he first tried to tough her breast she stopped him and said "Don't try that again." Now that he does not want to live without her he takes out his gun but knows she wouldn't want him to do that and he stops.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A good love and romance story.

dblameck

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