Title of Work: : Horrified (Monologue, Experience)
Author of Work: : Roseanne -NaPoWriMo - WGT- JDI
Date: : July 31, 2016

Plot:
The author goes to a scarry movie with her boyfriend, best friend and her boyfriend.

Scene/Setting:
The author tells us about a character who has agreed to double date with her best friend and the best friends, boyfriend. They are going to a scary movie, Chainsaw Massacre. As they head out to the movies we are told about the scary nightmares about a witch puppet from Mr. Rodgers Neighborhood and how the main character in the story, dreams about turning into that witch. We are told how the main character, once watched a movie called Scream when she was a lot younger at her best friend's house. She wasn't allow to watch scary movie's at home. We are told how the movie gave her nightmares for a long time.

The anxiety is built up as they get to the theater and the movie starts. We are told how the main character, watches the movie but doesn't find many of the sceness as scary as she thought she would. In the end she does run out of the movie, but it is unclear if it is because of freight, or just because she wants to leave a movie she doesn't like. Her boyfriend takes her back to the dorm and she eventually goes to sleep, thinking she is going to have nightmares. The nightmares never materialize.

Characters:
Main character
The main character's boyfriend
The main character's best friend
The Best friend's boyfriend.

Suggestions:
It was a little bit strange reading this piece. I think it would have been classified as third person omnificent, but I am not sure. You showed tension building as the main character headed to the theater. You showed how many people build up worries about things that never really worry them. It was a bit unclear on whether the Main Character ran out of the theater because of a scene or if she just wanted to get out of a movie she didn't like.

Character Count: 1,669 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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