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 Her Live Experience Open in new Window. [XGC]
Chantelle thinks she is just going to watch. She gets a whole lot more than she imagined
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Rated: XGC | (4.5)
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PLOT -Chantelle has had a master/slave relationship for six months on line and is ready to take it to the next level. She goes to a party, curious and excited to see the lifestyle in action. Dimitri is there to her surprise and they head off to a private room together.


SETTING -
Really good moments as Dimitri dominated her and took Chantelle to new heights. Chantelle testing her own strength and boundaries came off well. The scene in both the basement and bedroom were easy to picture.

CHARACTERS -
Chantelle is curious and excited to be at the party. Finding her master there led her to realize how much she wanted to be dominated by Dimitri. Dimitri is good at being the master, and takes good care of his new submissive.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE -
Chantelle could hear the sub moan and saw her on all fours her master as he used a crop on her ass---missing something between fours and her master.

Chantelle could here/hear his restraint waning.

He responded to the suction by pulling out and allowing her tolick the tip and nibble a bit.

You aren't playing/paying attention, Chantelle


She felt safe, secure and never had anyone evoked{/} these emotions save her father when she was a little girl


THOUGHTS -
A solid piece of writing taking the reader into the world of BDSM. Chantelle was a vivid character filled with longing, excitement and curiosity as she went into the party. She showed no signs of fear, genuinely caring about her master. It was a hot read and the pace was great. Nothing moved too fast that felt rushed. Nicely done. I enjoyed this one. You have a good grasp of the Erotic genre. Write on!
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