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Samantha Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Title of Work: : Samantha (Short Story, Nonsense)
Author of Work: : Tammy
Date: : July 31, 2016

Plot:
The life and times of a mosquito named Samantha.

Scene/Setting:
We are introduced to a mosquito named Samantha. The author is not sure why the misquito's name is Samantha, it just is. The author is not even sure why she is telling the story in English since it is not her home language. It seems Samantha, visits the author every morning just before the sun comes up and decides to see if she can fill her belly. Oh, by the way the author is not sure if Samantha is female. The author thinks the misquito, might be transgender.

The author tries to convince the mosquito to go away, but to no avail. Apparently the misquito likes to sing which sounds like, "Peeeeeeee - peeee - pee" to the human ear. The author even ends up in the hospital over night with a fractured wrist, because of trying to convince Samantha to go away. She told the mosquito about television shows where she could try out and maybe make a name for herself.

When the author came home from the hospital, Samanta had left, but her sister was now there. After having a good meal, the author found a note telling her to watch Samantha on a television talent show. She did and found Samantha wowing the Judges with a fine rendition of "Peeeeeeee - peeee - pee"

Characters:
Author
Samantha - Mosquito
Samantha's sister mosquito

Suggestions:
I love your writing. It is a little "off center" and that is what makes it so good. Write on!!!

Character Count: 1,328 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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