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Review of Anastasia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: GC | (4.0)
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Review of Anastasia

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Mary has been watching a woman of the night both on the street and in a club. she obviously in enraptured by what she sees. Continuing to watch she is noticed by the woman and is approached by her and invited to test the waters for herself.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The writer takes the time to describe the young lady known as Anastasia. The detail that she goes into is extensive and makes the woman very erotic without without any physical action. Anastasia having noticed her attention offers Mary a first hand sample of what she has to offer.

Mary and Anastasia spend time together in an upstairs bedroom and Mary goes away very satisfied.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A well balanced story with the beginning bringing the erotic expectations forward and then meeting those expectations in the end.

dblameck

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