Hi sybarrios,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a beautiful, poetic prayer, dear Sophie. I found it very uplifting.

What a lovely idea, to write your own prayer to begin the day with. The sentiments expressed are ones that I am sure many people will be able to relate to. I know that I can.

We all need a helping hand through life. We all need wisdom, and guidance, peace and love, the strength to be graceful, healing so that we can be the very best that we can be. Freedom from fear. The freedom to trust. You express this very well.

On the technical side of things, this is a good read. It has a lovely rhythm and flow. It's neatly presented and the larger font is easy on the eye - thank you! I like your use of punctuation, as this helps guide the reader. And I love that you allowed the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Great job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions. This is a wonderful prayer, and I didn't spot any errors nor anything I thought you could improve upon.

My Rating:

A lovely prayer poem, that I was happy to read. Thank you!

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




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