Hi Hannah ♫♥♫ ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

What a lovely, touching, creative poem, dear author! I can't imagine doing a double Acrostic. You, however, have done an excellent job with it.

This poem expresses the unique bond between sisters. It is indeed something very special. Sisters may have their own personalities, their own likes and dislikes, but there will always be moments shared, memories created, and a connection that will last throughout their lives.

I love the imagery in this poem - from cookies, and tea, and candy through racing through a field and climbing a tree. Both childhood and adult enjoyments. They all made me smile and think of the times I have shared with my own sister.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. Your use of the form is impressive. It has a pleasant rhythm and flow, and a lovely presentation that is easy on the eye - always appreciated. I love your use of punctuation, as this aids the overall clarity of the piece. And I love that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Great job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, sorry. I could not spot any errors, nor did I see anything that I felt you could improve upon. This poem works.

My Rating:

A lovely, touching poem that made me smile. I enjoyed the read, thank you!

I had no suggestions. I will give this item the 5 out of 5 rating it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




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