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Review of Heavy Machines  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Review of Heavy Machines

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about five jarheads taking on five Sherman tanks. Marines are known for their adaptability. In this case they go beyond what is expected to use a claymore and some grenades to defeat a row of five Vietnamese tanks. After they finish the job command calls in Puff the Magic Dragon to clean up. Puff was a AC-47 Gunship with side guns that could clear an area.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

the five man fire control team was spotting for the enemies mobile artillary. they discover the five tanks and take them on without assistance.

FINAL THOTS

A good snapshot of life in Viet Nam. Please keep writing and sharing. I found this story intriguing.

dblameck



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