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Hi JMRobison Author Icon,

This review is a part of "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window. [13+]. *Smile*

Overall Impression:

This is a cute little story, dear author! It's amazing how much you managed to pack within such a limited word count!

I chose this item because I loved the title. The story definitely lives up to it. You created a nice amount of tension through the use of clever imagery - the barking, the fangs, the girl rushing up the tree. Then, that tension is broken, allowing the reader to smile. I love the term "big doggie heart". That pretty much sums it up.

Within the span of 55 words, there is conflict of a sort, and resolution. You painted a clear picture of the two characters. I liked your writing style. Overall, I say well done!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, dear author. I could spot no errors. Didn't see anything I felt in need of a tweak. Great job.

My Rating:

A sweet little piece that made me smile. I was happy to read it.

I didn't have any suggestions, so I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit

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