Hi willy ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a sweet little poem, dear author! It made me smile.

I think that this is a piece that many of us will be able to relate to. I certainly can. I have poems that I am pretty proud of, but others might read them and scratch their heads. They might even think that they're terrible! I've found that it happens the other way around as well, though. Poems of mine that I think are no good at all get embraced by readers who think they're wonderful. Guess you can never tell...

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It has a nice rhythm and flow. I like your use of punctuation, as this helps guide the reader and assists the overall clarity of the piece. I also like that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Well done!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, dear author. I could spot no errors, nor anything that I thought you can improve upon. Great job!

My Rating:

A sweet, entertaining poem. I enjoyed the read.

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .