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Review of Adam and Eve  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of Adam and Eve

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story with lots of archeological information. The background information is very interesting and makes for a good backdrop to the scenario of finding the mummies of Adam and Eve.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Adam and Eve would be the only bodies in history not to umbilicus or belly buttons. That would be the telling sign that the two mummies would be Adam and Eve. The searching for the bodies is well presented and I almost feel that I could work alongside of John and Dave as they carefully begin the search for significant relics of the past.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It is an interesting aspect that so much of history is found in this area.

Please keep writing and sharing your ideas and thought with the rest of us on WDC.

dblameck


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