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 Raining on the Inside Open in new Window. [ASR]
Flash Fiction: Caught up in the rat race and deceived.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Review of Raining on the Inside

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The story starts with someone expressing frustration with not being able to keep up with the work. The complaint is there is no time for anything else. everything is work. No time to talk. No time for anything. The writer is just overwhelmed with caring for the children and the other assigned duties.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

there is a general feeling from the writer that there is no way to find peace in this life they are currently leading. Is this not the plaintive cry of so many in our world today? Finally the pace has been so exhausting that the writer needs to get away for even a few moments for a walk. Now there is a twist that I leave it to the reader to discover.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

The story brought a smile to my face. Please keep writing and sharing your ideas.

dblameck


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