Hi Patrece ~ , This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" [13+]. Overall Impression: This is a beautiful, passionate poem, dear author. It expresses what love can be. The kind of love people are looking for. A love that can be difficult to find, but when you have it, it's the kind of love you never let go of. True love is indeed a need. It's a deep, connected sharing between two human beings. It cannot be expressed in a single word, as you say. I think that you do an excellent job of describing it in this poem. On the technical side of things, you have done a great job. This piece has a good rhythm and flow. I love your use of punctuation - very helpful. And I love that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. That perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Suggestions: I have no suggestions, dear Patrece. Not helpful, I know, but I could spot no errors, nor did I see anything I felt you could improve upon. Your poem works for me. My Rating: This is a poem that packs a punch. I enjoyed reading it. I had no suggestions, so I will give this item the 5 out of 5 rating it deserves. Thank you for sharing your work, and write on! Kit My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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