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 A Miraculous Kinship Open in new Window. [E]
A fun poem I wrote for Valentines Day.
by Mista Winstrom Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Rhythm/Rhyme:
A free verse poem. It has a nice pace to it, flowed well from one sentence to the next. There were good elements of imagery that hooked me in as I read through.

Summary:
A poem about love and a special relationship. The title was felt through the poem, the last line hooking back to it well. There is hope in it, a glimpse into the crazy world we live in and its perceptions.

Critique:
It made me wonder if the person the poem is about has passed away. The line about "looking upon you fondly" brought that to mind. Embers of my passion conjured really good imagery. It is a sweet poem, looking to the good in relationships and love, what they bring to each of us, and the happiness that comes from it. The world can be a dark depressing place, which you hit upon. Yet love can come in and wipe all of that away. I agree that love can be a miracle. The last few lines gave hope as they traversed into the unknown together. One never knows what may come, but having someone to share it all with, to lean on in the hard times is always a good thing.

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