Hi Charlie ~ ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a beautiful poem, dear Charlie. Being a bookworm, it certainly spoke to me.

I love the smell of books. It's something you'll never get from your Kindle, Kobo, whatever. And I love old books, books that have been held by other hands (so long as those other hands haven't left icky, unidentifiable stains). Books that have been loved. Those little notes you mention always make me smile, and I do sometimes wonder who those people were, and how and why a book with such tender sentiments within it has ended up in a secondhand bookstore, and found its home with me. Those little secrets may not add or detract from the story, but they do add a certain something.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I love its rhythm and flow. I love its creative presentation. I love the larger font - always appreciated. I love your use of punctuation, as this helps guide the reader and assists the overall clarity. And I love that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. You have done an excellent job.

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, sorry. Not helpful, I know, but I didn't find any errors, nor anything I felt that you could improve on. This poem works for me.

My Rating:

This is an excellent poem that made me smile. Thank you!

I had no suggestions. I will give this item the 5 out of 5 rating it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .