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 Devoured Open in new Window. [18+]
Kate is finally released. Ah, it feels good to be sane. What could possibly go wrong?
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Review of Devoured  Open in new Window.
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Review of Devoured

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A woman has been released from a mental health facility. However it seems there are still some problems. Her brother is driving her home and she has a strange vision.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Kate is pumped full of medications and drowsy as her brother Alex is driving home to be with her mother. She thinks she sees a man who has been struck in the road. When her brother stops the car she dashes off and tries to search for the man. She then thinks she is being captured by a demon that is part man and partly a body that is missing it's flesh. It is obvious that Kate still needs some help. Alex is doing all that he can and perhaps even this is a dream.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good story and I enjoyed it.

dblameck


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