Title of Work: : The Night I Ate My Words (fiction, comedy)
Author of Work: :capt. hoosie starship bovine
Date: : July 23

Plot:
A bull gets closed into the local library building, all by itself.

Scene/Setting:
A writing bull, goes to the local libray in the country with his human. He gets the special animal computer right away, while his human has to wait her turn. The bull gets caught up in the story he is typing and loses all track of time. He doesn't realize when the ten minuet closing warning is given. He doesn't even realize when the lights are turned off he didn't realize he was alone in the library. His stomach(s) started to rumble and he finally realized he was alone and he was hungry. It was time for his evening hay and cider (?) He emailed his friend Bovine Bessie and she said he should print out his story. He didn't see how that was going to get him something to eat, until he followed her directions and realized the paper tasted good.

Characters:
Starship Bovine
Bovine Bessie

Suggestions:
Oh, this is just too funny. I like the way you tell a story. I think it would be tummy's. Cows have four stomachs. I know I'm being a tiny bit picky here, but wouldn't the bulls human make sure the bull followed her out the door. I would think it would be hard for him to be missed. Also I can't see the libraian leaving him in there. Maybe as far as the "human" is concerned you could mentioned she left early, and told him she would see him at home. Just saying.....

Character Count: (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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