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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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Title of Work: : Together (Short Story, Cultural}
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Plot:
"Strangers met at a birthday party, dated and fell in love only to learn a hidden secret." This is a story written in answer to a prompt: "Write a romance where two characters fall in love but some obstacle keeps them apart."

Scene/Setting:
It starts out at Cheryl's birthday party. The guest are many. Cheryl is introduced to Charlene Schmidt and the two women hit it off immediately. They sit and talk all night. When they go to leave they make arrangements to meet the next day and do fun things. The next day they spend the day at the zoo and then walking around at the park. They have a great dinner and then go to a club which accepts their way of life. That night they agree to spend the night together. Before the night is over they have fallen totally and completely in love.

They spend many weeks together and eventually move together. One night they are talking and through the facts which come out in the conversation, they realize they are actually twin sisters. This doesn't stop them from falling in love and getting "married".

Characters:
Cheryl Martin
Suzanne Campbell - Cheryl's best friend
Julie
Charlene Schmidt

Suggestions:
I liked this piece. You didn't say it was non-fiction, but I am thinking maybe it is. It is an interesting story with a very good twist to it. Thank you for sharing. Write on!

Character Count: 1,249 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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