Title of Work: : If Teenagers Ruled the World (Essay, Philosophy) Author of Work: : Anastasia Bell Street Date: : July 23 Plot: Points about teenagers ruling the world. Scene/Setting: The author gives her arguments and points to why it would be good to let teenagers rule the world. Points made: 1. "... teenagers are probably the most idealistic people in the world" 2. "... they are not burdened with age, cynicism, and a flat out jaded view, they would have a fresher outlook of this planet." 3. " Higher education would be the foremost on their minds..." 4. "... they have incredible energy just by virtue of being young...." 5. "... they are capable of great works... " 6. "... Young people could be more philosophical, have a vision, and a better retirement plan." The author does concede that this idea "... might destroy the "luxury" of being young, out on your own, and making mistakes that would serve as a lifelong lesson plan...." She backs up her idea with the history of many kings and queens being crowned when they were very young. Her last sentence is true. " Teenagers are a source of wisdom we are not mining ..." Characters: Author Suggestions: Not sure what to say about this post. And here is not the place to get into giving you back arguments to your thoughts. You make some valid points, I will agree. Keep thinking about this as you get older though. I would be very interested to see you do revisions when you become a young adult, middle aged and mature, and a senior citizen. Write on! Character Count: 1,341 (tags = 173 Characters above this point) ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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