Hi ~Lifelessons~ ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a lovely, soothing poem, dear author. I enjoyed reading it.

You use excellent imagery in this piece. I could picture everything clearly - you took me along with you to a special place of peace and beauty. I have had dreams, too, that felt like more than a dream, though I haven't been to a place like this. I would sure like to travel there, as it sounds like a wondrous experience.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. Its rhythm and flow were in tune with your words. It is nicely presented and easy on the eye - always appreciated. I like your use of punctuation, as that helps guide the reader and aids the overall clarity. And I love how you allowed the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. That perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Great job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, sorry. I know it's not very helpful, but I could spot no errors, nor did I find anything I thought you could improve upon. I think the poem is lovely as it is.

My Rating:

A beautiful poem, of a beautiful experience. I was glad to read it.

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item the 5 out of 5 it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .