Hi Mitchopolis ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a fun poem, dear author. I am sure that many readers will be able to recognise themselves in it. I know that I can!

Procrastination... why do we do it? I keep on telling myself that I will definitely get better at being organised, doing stuff when I need to do so, and yet, I always put things off. I make lists. I might tick off some items, and then I lose the list accidentally-on-purpose. I daydream, browse online... the weirdest thing is that whilst I resent every bit of housework I have ever done, and will do, I turn into a cleaning fiend when faced with an essay deadline. I can't explain it, as it doesn't even feel nice when I am doing it, yet here I am, thinking about all my avoidance techniques after reading your poem.

On the technical side of things, your poem reads well. It's an interesting form, with a pleasant rhythm and flow. I like your use of punctuation, as it assists the reader and the overall clarity of the piece. Good job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions. Not helpful, I know, but I like this poem the way that it is. I could spot no errors, nor anything I felt you could improve upon.

My Rating:

This is a fun, honest poem. I enjoyed the read.

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item the 5 out of 5 it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .