Hi PandaPaws Licensed VetTech ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a very touching poem, dear author. It expresses well those emotions I think many people feel in the face of such events.

The poem speaks about the many questions that arise in the aftermath of a terrible event. You are quite correct that there is always finger pointing, always a search for comfort, but the main struggle is to find out why. Why did the person do this? Why didn't we see it coming? Followed by a how could they do this? How can we help? And a what now?

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I had no trouble finding the rhythm and flow. The poem is nicely presented, and easy on the eye. I like your use of punctuation, and how you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. That is very helpful, and assists the overall clarity and reading experience.

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions about the content of the poem. I think it's great the way it is. The only suggestion I have is to capitalise the "t" in "to" at the beginning of the final line of the second stanza. That would correct a little inconsistency in what I mentioned above - how you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece.

My Rating:

This is a powerful poem. I thought that it made for a good read.

I did have one tiny suggestion, but it was just about the capitalisation of one letter. Therefore, I will still give your item the 5 out of 5 it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .