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Review of Origins of Friday the 13th

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

So much information that I have been ignorant of. I am quite aware that society which has been male dominated has failed to consider the female point of view. This essay is very eye opening and I think it will cause me to do some research and look for changes.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

there are things in your article that I found illuminating. The term womb-man for woman and the idea of thirteen months of thirty days which follow the lunar cycle are ideas that perhaps should be expanded upon.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I was impressed by the sentence "The horror of war, famine, abuses, and impending ecological disaster are rooted in the loss of valuing the feminine and all life as sacred."

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing and sharing your ideas.

dblameck


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