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Review of a Night to Remember

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A great story about what must have been a most trying experience. Having had a child who got involved with things that put him on the wrong side of the law I am understand some of your pain. I thank you for taking the time and effort to share your story with us.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Kellye like so many others has made some bad choices. As a parent you have to also make choices. Your choices sometimes seem harsh but are necessary if the child is going to move forward with some choices they have to make in order to get their lives back in order. As for Kellye she has a cast of characters to assist her. Counsellors, sponsors, probation officer and other court employees all eventually to help her. Most important of course are her loving parents.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Once aagain thank you for sharing your story.

dblameck


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