Hello, Game of Thrones reviewing. I enjoyed your poem. I like the way it is written.
There was not much rhythm in this poem. It was easy to read and I like the story behind it. I can see the beginning of the relationship the dating relationship and the marriage finally they each life ends. It is sad but that is what happens in life.
The flow of the poem was okay. Your word choice for the poem was well thought out. It heightened the message and coincided with the meaning of what you wanted to portray.
I saw the imagery of lives working and living together through the poem and it reminded me of my own life and the path I have chosen. I chose to get married to a man I love. Our lives will end in physical death.
The theme of the poem I thought was to capture the life of two hearts that truly beat as one.
I do not think there were grammatical errors in the piece. I know there were no spelling errors.
All in all I enjoyed the poem. I really hope that you enjoyed writing it. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.



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