Title of Work: : Turlach Handbook, Day 2 - Background
Author of Work: : skeason
Date: : July 19

Plot:
A scribe is asking a troll questions.

Scene/Setting:
Turlach, an old troll sits with a young scribe to answer questions but the Realm, government insist each troll be asked. The young scribe decids todays questions are going to be about Turlach's family. Turlach tells about his father who he loved. His father was a great carver both of small and large things. His beloved mother liked to travel and took good care of the family. She could do magic and preferred to make thing beautiful, even though she had studied "war" magic. Turlach, barely talks about his brothers. As he says, they helped each other, they fought with each other, they loved each other and they hated each other. The were normal brothers. His wife, Lim, is well loved. She makes his life peaceful and add joys to the days, has for ninty five years.

Characters:
Young scribe
Turlach - a Troll

Suggestions:
This is the only part I have read about Turlach. Without reading the other parts I am thinking, you are doing the background for a future epic fantasy story. I like the way you have broken the parts up. This piece is well written and shows a lot of emotions without having you characters, jumping up, or hitting something, which is a mistake many authors use to show emotion. I enjoyed the read.

Character Count: 1,228 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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