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I am Joey C and I am here in your port as part of our teams Review/challenge for "Game of Thrones" I am pressed into to service for the House of GREYJOY


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Why I picked this entry to review -

First, I am more interested in stories over poetry mostly because I suck at the latter. So providing comment on this gentle art seems less worthwhile, even a waste of an author's time to impose upon them my views of rhythm and rhyme.

So, through your portfolio, I rambled, looking for tales of love, hate, adventure, mystery, crime, the sublime or even the horror of drama. And yes the were folders with more than a few, but they were all dusty with limp covers from their waiting on the shelves, a year or even longer. I wanted fresh, something new, a reflection of the current you.

This was an entry for Wodehouse Challenges: you were to List five female artists (music or the arts) - who were pioneers in their field. Give brief summaries of their accomplishments. List five women who have broken the 'glass ceiling' by becoming pioneers in the business/entrepreneurial world. Give a brief summary of their accomplishments. Give five reviews of women writers, and lastly, write a brief essay on the woman that has most impacted your life.

I found your picks for your lists astounding, there was not one I would have disagreed with as worthy. You chose women of distinction and that fit the categories very well. It seemed that you were quite attuned to the important contributions of women to the arts and business.

I also found your choice the women who most influenced you to be special as I to set great store in the lessons imparted to me by my grandmother, but I too would choose the inspiration of my mother as the most influential in my life. (but then in fairness, wouldn't most men?)
Had it not been for my mother, I would have most likely followed a career in the military, law enforcement, or politics as did my father. But thanks to my mother, one of America's pioneer female engineers I followed the path of creation over destruction.

I found your writing easy to read, insightful and entertaining. I would, however, encourage you to think about writing a few stories now and then, poems are sweet but more often just tweets. Give us some meat, a leg with a bone to chew on, even if it's only once in a while.





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