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Primal Need, Natural Hunger Open in new Window. [18+]
Weekly Quickie Round 46: Their need for one another is animalistic and insatiable.
by A*Monaing*Faith Author Icon
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Review of Primal Need, Natural Hunger

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Two very different characters. Marcos is wild and it seems that he even eat raw meat. The story written for an erotic weekly writing contest. Instead of concentrating on the sexual aspect of the action between the two characters the story deals with the animalistic nature of the male character and the comparison sensual aspect of the female character.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Marcos is compared to the jaguar. The author is quite clear that he does not mean the high powered sports car but rather the most dangerous member of the cat family. She however controls the leash on this big cat. The final paragraph Abby shows her control and ties her lover to the headboard.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good story for the limited word count allowed by the contest. Write more erotica.

dblameck


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