Title of Work: : Old Lovers and New Tattoos (XGC, Fiction, Erotica)
Author of Work: : TeaGarden
Date: : July 19th

Plot:
A man ex comes to visit in order to pick up a few things and then stays.

Scene/Setting:
The author's ex (we are not told if it is girlfriend, wife, roommate or even significant other, returns to his home, which was once theirs. She is there to pick up a few things she had not taken with her the first time. She goes into the bedroom and when she bends over he notices a new tattoo she has gotten on her lower back. He asks to see it and she agrees to show it to him. It is a dragon which extends from just above the waistband of her pants to below it, taking up part of her cheek. He asks if he can touch it and she asks him what he would do if she said yes. He says he would lick all of it. She agrees and leans over the bed. He licks the whole tatoo, dropping into the valley of her cheeks and continues downward. Using his mouth, he gives her an orgism. The last line is, " I granted her unspoken wish as I suckled gently at the tiny pearl between her legs, and soon she was singing out her joy on my bed once more."

Characters:
Janet - ex
Author

Suggestions:
Not much to suggests here. The only one of the five main senses you didn't use was smell. This could have been worked in easily. I enjoyed the read. I'm just about ready to e-publish my first book which also Erotica/Romance (two men and one woman). I had no problem seeing in my mind what was happening.

Character Count: (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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