Hi Kurt Philip Behm ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is an interesting poem, dear Kurt. It raises some interesting questions.

Eternity is something that I have difficulty wrapping my head around. What would it be like to live for ever, and ever, and ever... If we are speaking of an afterlife, what will that be like? As this poem expresses, will it be all blessing? Will there be any strife? I think that, at first, we would appreciate it just being blessings, because we have known strife. But will that wear off, eventually? Will such an existence ultimately feel pointless? I don't know, but you made me think, and that is always a good thing.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I had no trouble catching on to its rhythm and flow. It's nicely presented, and easy on the eye. Great job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestion about the actual content. I like it as it is. If anything, perhaps you could add some more punctuation, to aid the overall clarity and impact. For example, a question mark at the end of each second line.

Also, not related directly to the poem, but I suggest adding a brief description to the item instead of -----. The reason is that if potential readers have more of an idea what to expect, they are more likely to click on your item.

My Rating:

An interesting poem, that made me think. I liked it.

I did have a couple of suggestions, but those were more of a matter of personal preference. Therefore, I will still give your item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .