Hi ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a beautiful, touching poem, dear Ann. I love the tender touch of this piece.

You are right - beauty is indeed all around us. We can see it everywhere, if we just look at the world with eyes of love. And when we love someone, their beauty is infinitely magnified. I have noticed that. The more we love someone, the more beauty they have to us. And when someone has an ugly personality, it works the other way. They may be generally considered attractive, yet all of a sudden they lose their attraction to us. At least, that is my experience.

I love the gentle imagery in this poem. The emotion shines through clearly, and can be felt. From your heart, to the reader's heart.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I love the rhythm and flow. It's well-presented, with a nice font size that is easy on the eye. I also love your use of punctuation. It aids the overall clarity and reading experience. You have done an excellent job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions about the poem's content. I like it just the way it is. The only thing I'd suggest is allowing the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This would perfect the overall clarity and reading experience.

My Rating:

A lovely - and loving - poem, dear Ann. I was glad to read it.

I did have one suggestion, but that's more of a personal preference. So, I will still give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .