Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Awesome beginning to such a sad ending. Was this an interculatural romance? I thought it was going to lament towards a former relationship but it turned into something unexpected and different.

Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I think this is the perfect piece to speak to people who are either going through or have gone through a casual romance. No pressure to make it something other than what it was. No acrimony or hate is such a powerful statement that we can live in the moment and let go when its needed. My only word of caution is make sure it's understood at the outset. It probably wouldn't speak to those who believe in traditional family value type relationships, but probably not the audience for this piece anyway.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

To me, it was about keeping feelings in perspective and be able to protect yourself when engaging in a romance that wasn't meant to go anywhere. I love that you ended it on a high note, hate is not yet commonplace. Let it go before it gets there.


Glows:

You started each verse with the same repetition. I actually haven't seen that done too much which somewhat surprises me.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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