Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Had to read this one. I used to cut class all the time. In fact, my friends and I used to drive around our high school parking lots doing figure eights before school started blasting Pink Floyd. Oddly enough, we got suspended for writing and publishing an underground zine. And then, I became one of those arrogant teachers, ha!

Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

This is a brilliant piece of work, putting us in the mind of one of the disenfranchised. I hated school too. My teachers put me in special education and I had to go to junior college to find out I was smart.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

There is purpose in what you right. You might be a loner at the school you're at, but the world now holds I think 6 billion people. Your tribe is out there and as far as hating the human race, it can bring out the worst. Modern media doesn't help showcasing unusual circumstances on a twenty four hour news cycle but people are both good and bad. Not everyone is worthy of hate, reserve that for the few that really are. Even then, I would say, watch that tendency carefully because life is like a battery, it takes both the positive and negative to make it go.


Glows:

Keep fighting the fit, Introverts Unite!


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Miscellaneous Comments:

I will tell you school doesn't allow much flexibility for non-conformity but if you can hang in there and go to college, even if it's just junior college, I can tell by your writing that you're smart. School is a fishbowl and life is a much greater ocean that you are just now beginning to cross.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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