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Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

A very honest portrayal of human suffering. I imagine it is hard sometimes to always feel like you're on the edge of a great precipice and don't have the strength to hold on. But, I would say you do. You don't the blessing your presence gives people in times of crisis. I think people who are in physical pain or other have a tendency to understandably allow the pain to isolate them. But, the beauty of this site is that your words are a blessing to other people who feel the same pain as you. My pain connects with yours and to major extent for me, it's comforting to know that we are not alone in our struggles. There sensitive, like-minded people out there who want to be shaped by the human experience.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I think reviewing is such an excellent way to get to know people and feel less isolated. I've said it before, I don't go to counseling, even though I could benefit from it. Right now, writing is enough. It allows me to feel a sense of connection and I thank you for sharing yours.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

It's a heart wrenching and beautiful portrayal of the deepest type of pain.


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Thank you for sharing this piece.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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