Hi Caitie ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

What a lovely poem, Caitie! I love dragons, and moonlight, so this is right up my street.

I really like the idea of the moon helping out the dragon. That is a lovely image. The beams piercing through the darkness, creating a path to help the dragon find his home. And once there, the dragon waiting for the light of the sun. I could picture it all very well.

On the technical side of things, this poem has a lovely rhythm and flow. I like that you use punctuation throughout. That is really helpful to the reader, thank you! I also like that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. That perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Good job!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, Caitie! I love this poem just the way it is.

My Rating:

This is a fun, cute poem. I was very glad that I got to read it!

I had no suggestions. So, I will give this item the 5 out of 5 rating that it deserves. Again, well done!

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .