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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Creeper Of The Realm  PLOT - A couple are on the brink of ending their marriage because lust for another has caused him to stray. They both are hopeful, trying to figure a way out of the mess their life has become. Unfortunately, Tim has a back up plan and that plan threatens to ruin any future they may have together. SETTING - There were good descriptions of his feelings, how he saw Brooke, and what the surroundings were like at the cabin. Also of the sun streaming through the window and shining on the gun. CHARACTERS - Brooke is brave enough to admit that she has cheated as well, but wants to wipe the slate clean and start over, even offering to renew their wedding vows. Tim is so distraught, even though he is the one to blame, yet he sees his only recourse is to end things in a permanent manner. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - The dialog was gripping as Brooke admitted to cheating as well. The inner dialog of Tim played well against her words. THOUGHTS - What a very sad tale. It's a shame he saw his only recourse was to pull out the gun. Yes love is a very powerful emotion, one that can sometimes threatens to break the best of us. If love can break you, then it is also capable of mending a broken heart and soul, if only given the chance. Write on!   
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