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 Trespassing on Paradise Island Part One Open in new Window. [NPL]
Superman experiences an amazon punishment.
by KingsSideCastle Author Icon
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Rated: NPL | (4.5)
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Title of Work: : Trespassing on Paradise Island Part One (Fanfiction)
Author of Work: : KingsSideCastle
Date: : July 17

Plot:
Superman experiences an Amazon punishment

Scene/Setting:
Diana has come to Paradise Island to relax. She is summoned to Hypolyta's chambers for an emergency council meeting. There she finds Superman has been arrested and about to be punished. Diana wants to save him so she talks her mother into letting her use her lasso of truth and see why Superman has really come to the island, hoping it will be enough to make the punishment un-necessary. When she asks her questions she finds, Superman has come because he loves her and just wanted to see her again. Hypolyta says the reason is not enough and forces Wonder Woman to take care of the punishment, which she reluctantly agrees to do. Superman is taken to Diana's chambers.

Characters:
Diana - Wonder Woman
Clark Kent - Superman
Hypolyta - Wonder Woman's mother

Suggestions:
Correct spelling: Trespassing (you have an extra "s" in the word of the title). I love it when someone can take established make believe characters and put them into what would be considered an abnormal circumstance for the story of their existence. I found this story very entertaining. Since I need to do two reviews for you, connected to the Game of Thrones on this site, I will be heading to the next chapter.

Character Count: 1,231 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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