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Review of My Darling  Open in new Window.
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of My Darling

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A love letter expressing how great is this person's desire for the other. It is unclear if the letter is written by a male or female (In today's world it does not matter because it is just one person who loves another). The letter is fairly brief there is only 256 words. It is mostly engaged in how much one is going to miss the other and then moves to thoughts of the two of then reuniting and experiencing that bliss.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The expressions of absence from the other fill the first paragraph and words like haunting and despair show a sense of loss for the other.

In the second paragraph we find that there is only two weeks before they will be reunited and still it seems life has no meaning because they are not together.

The third and final paragraph contains the hopes for the moments of coming together again.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for sharing this romantic and lovely letter.

dblameck

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