Wink and a hug [13+] Prompt : A world where money doesn't exist and people pay with social contact. |
A review for the House of GreyJoy ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Review of Wink and a Hug First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the contest of the Game of Thrones. OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: Would the world be a better place if we paid our bills with a a little affection or kindness? I think it just might and this story gives us a glimpse of that society. PLOT & CHARACTERS: A man, Mr Dyer, pays for a coffee and a newspaper with a smile, a handshake and a wink. He sees a woman paying for a taxi fare with a very ammorus kiss. He wants to take the taxi and he flirts with the woman. It is an interesting scene and I quite enjoyed the concept. SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: This was a great idea. FINAL THOUGHTS: keep writing and sharing with all of us. dblameck My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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