Hi Winnie Kay ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a beautiful poem, dear author. Very touching, too, and I love that you have written it for your brothers, and added those pictures, too. It's a real feel-good item.

You do make a good point in it. A point about how, as they grew up, they shared everything. That meant that they always received the same toys. Never had a birthday on which the focus was on just the one of them. I can't quite imagine what that would be like - there is quite an age gap between my sister and I.

Yet, they did grow up to be two individuals with their own personalities, and that is good to see. And they will always have the other. I bet that the bond between twins is a truly special one.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I had no trouble picking up on the rhythm and the flow. It has an excellent rhyming scheme. I loved the presentation. And I love your use of punctuation - this helps with the overall clarity and reading experience.

Suggestions:

I have no real suggestions, apart from, perhaps, allowing the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend on the individual sentences within the piece. I know that that is a matter of personal preference, however.

My Rating:

I loved this poem. I was very happy to find it whilst browsing through your portfolio.

I did have one suggestion, but that, as said, is a matter of personal preference. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5. It deserves it.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .