Green With Envy [13+] Discrimination is like energy. It cannot be made or destroyed, but it can change forms. |
A review for the House of GreyJoy ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Review of Green with Envy First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is being done in conjunction with the contest Game of Thrones. OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: I didn't know what to think at first. It seems that some of the competition for the ski-jump event are different shades of green. My first reaction was that perhaps these other contestants were not human. Possibility of people from outer space. As i read more it seems that were were people who just had a shade of green and other who were darker green. The more I the read the more confused I became. PLOT & CHARACTERS: It seems that they take chlorophyll as a performance enhancing drug. SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: Make your reason for the colour change more evident. FINAL THOUGHTS: Keep writing and sharing your ideas and stories. dblameck My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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