Title of Work: : Paakhi
Author of Work: :sindbad - We Got This!
Date: : July 12

Plot:
Lamenting over a puppy gone to a new home.

Scene/Setting:
The author is lamenting over a puppy he had been either taking care of or raising, going to a new home. We are not told why the puppy had to go to a new home. He tells how Paakhi was constantly underfoot. He tells how Paakhi wouldn't leave him alone for even a moment, but how he really didn't mind. When it was happening he gives us hints he might have been a bit perturbed Paakhi was always under foot.

Now that Paakhi is gone, he is having a very hard time just getting through the days without the puppy. He knows she is in a good new home. She loves the people she is now staying with. We can take it for granted by the authors description he has visited the Paakhi in her new home and seen how she is getting along with the new family.

Characters:
Paakhi - puppy
I - Owner of puppy

Suggestions:
This was a really cute description of missing a dog. You have a word count so I am thinking you did it for one of the many writing prompts on the site. I can definitely see the puppy, being a bother, but a loveable bother. Made me think of a few puppies we have had over the years. A few we have had to find new homes for, because of moving or new family circumstances. This is a very unusual name. Is this a puppy you had? Does the name mean anything special?


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