Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I love acrostics! I love your use of active voice in this piece. It gives the poem a ceratain energy to it.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Some poets really appreciate well executed acrostics. They can be hard to write, or at least I think so because the writer has to conform to rules and structure of them.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I love the idea of death being welcomed with a laugh. We all die so I guess its important for me to try not to fear it. I also love the faith in this piece that visions of eternity extinguish the dark. That's such a powerful line.


Glows:

It a light in the dark. For me it's a choice. We can either feed into the fear of the end or believe so mightily that there is something else out there that can exstinguish the fear. And, since no one knows for sure, there is no harm in clinging to a belief that brings light to the dark. In fact, I think its needed now more than ever.



Grows:

I'd have capitalized every line but it may not be correct form to do that but it would be my preference to see that its an acrostic right away.


Miscellaneous Comments:

Another beautiful piece that touches me deeply. Thank you for sharing your work.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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