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The Kindness Elves Open in new Window. [E]
The Origins of the KinD Team.
by Amay Author Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I love good a Santa poem and this was one was especially good because it focused on the creation of role modeling random acts of kindness, therefore, being able to spread them. What a great way to promote holiday cheer!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I recommend this piece to anyone that loves stories about Santa's workshop and home. It's always fun to imagine Santa during the planning process before Christmas.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It was a great creation story of the Kindness Team in the North Pole. What a clever idea! It's not a huge jump to imagine elves creating a plan to solve the increasing numbers on the naughty list.


*StarStruck* Glows:

I love the sense of urgency with the Alpha Team elves and the idea of a records keeping department. Of course, there would be one and it would be transformed to the Kindness Team!



*Vine1* Grows:

I just wonder if any of the reindeer get roped in. Ha! Sorry, couldn't resist.



*Dialog* Miscellaneous Comments:

The character Sally is humbling because truly anyone can be the impetus of great ideas and it takes a team to listen and spur those ideas into action. It sounds like Santa's workshop is highly collaborative work station and his employees are satisfied.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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