This is a very descriptive poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like that each stanza had a specific subject focused on it.
I don't see why the 'Harvest' stanza is put in there. Everything else had to with the leaves on the trees. The 'Harvest' stanza has to with food and thanksgiving. It has good wording and because the leaves sometimes tell us when we need to harvest food, it would make sense. But since you go back to leaves after the 'Harvest' stanza then it does not quite fit in my opinion. Except for the 'Harvest' stanza you came across clearly and concisely.
The rhyme in the poem fit fairly. It is nice to see that you used words that sound alike yet may not be spelled alike.
The visual images you portrayed were detailed enough to help me see what you saw when you wrote this piece. I enjoy watching the leaves fall from the trees in the autumn and you brought me to a place where I could see that. Thank you.
Thank you for writing this poem. I appreciate your talent and everything you give to this group of people. Keep Writing.



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