Hi Eiji ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a lovely poem, dear author. Nature and the seasons do inspire, don't they?

I love the imagery in this piece. I especially love your use of sound - the cello, the caws, the violin. That added a special touch. Three stanzas for the three seasons. The contrast between the haunting tune of Autumn and the lilting tune of Spring. Very nice.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It's nicely presented, and has a pleasant rhythm and flow.

Suggestions:

The only suggestions I have are to do with punctuation and capitalisation, rather than the actual content.

You do use some punctuation, which is great as it aids the overall clarity of the piece and makes it easier to pick up on its rhythm and flow. I would complete the punctuation where necessary, for greater consistency.

I would also, then, allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend on the individual sentences within the piece. This would perfect the overall reading experience.

My Rating:

As you can no doubt tell, I enjoyed this poem. I was happy to read it.

I did have a couple of suggestions, but those were more a matter of personal preference. Therefore, I will still give your item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you so much for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .